Federica
Degwitz
Good
Headlines:
This is
an example of a good headline because it gives you specific meaning and carry a
lot of information about the article in just one sentence. Also, it carries
just enough information to understand the problem but will leave the reader
wanting to read more in-depth about the story. It does not contain articles or
conjunctions. It is very straightforward and informative
I really
liked this headline because again it just tells the reader specific information
about the article. It is very straightforward without any ambiguity,
insinuations, or double meanings.
This is an
example of a good lead because it creates a lot of curiosity in the reader. We believe
that of course fossil fuels pollute but when we read that we are the ones that
do, it challenges what we have been taught. So, us, the reader will feel the
need to understand how and why is this article correct or accurate.
Bad headlines:
This is an
example of a bad headline because it does not convey a complete thought. From
that headline the reader does not understand what the story is about. In
addition, it doesn’t contain specific information and concrete wording about
the story. This headline is very unclear and even ambiguous.
After reading
the story, it is about a football player who is charged for abusing his
4-year-old son. This incident caused a debate on whether it is okay to punish a
kid or not, and the answer is NO.
The headline
should be:
It’s NEVER Ok to
Hit Children.
This is
an example of a bad headline because it is not specific; this headline does not
give the reader a piece of information that will generate interest in the story.
We do not know what the other “talking point” is about. Also, the headline is
in past tense. In addition, this headline does not provide information weight.
The
headline should be:
More health insurers are signing on
to participate in Obamacare
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