The attribution in the broadcast was very well done. Host
Steve Inskeep introduced Karen Grigsby Bates before she came on air. He said,
“Karen Rigsby Bates from NPR’s Code Switch team reports.” Then we heard from her for the first time. This is exactly the way it should be done in broadcasting
and isn’t expected in print journalism. The radio broadcast personalized the
news, which is extremely important especially because there isn’t a visual
aspect in radio. It’s a good way for them to connect with the audience when
what they’re saying is directed to the listeners. This is not usually common in
print journalism.
In the broadcast, the statistic for Carol’s Daughter’s
revenue was rounded to 27 million, while a print story would prefer to use the
exact figure. There was little punctuation used and there weren’t any symbols
in the transcript, which is important because it makes the writing clearer and
smoother when it’s read on the air. It also reduces risk of making a mistake
while reading. Some symbols can be used in print journalism, like the dollar
sign, but it shouldn’t show up in writing for the radio. Most of the broadcast
was in present tense, which is important because it gives a sense of immediacy
to the information. I did notice some of the sentences were a little too long. Some
could have been broken up into two since they were combining two thoughts. The language
and word choice was easy for me to understand though.
Overall, this was very well written. Since I was hearing this
as a form of audio reporting, it gave a voice to the story, which really added
to the experience of listening to it.
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